What would you say
If I told you
I think about you all the time
I hunger for reasons to touch you
I dream that you’re totally mine
My senses are losing their senses
When you and I meet eye to eye
My heart is alarmed by it’s weakness
in watching you just walking by
What would you say
If I called you
And asked you to meet me sometime
Or I could just send you an ecard
I love you
Be My Valentine
Wonderful..
A delightful and timely appeal that should not fall on deaf ears if the recipient knows anything about good structure, phrasing, rhythm and rhyme. Very well done.
Thank You
LOVE this: “My senses are losing their senses
When you and I meet eye to eye
My heart is alarmed by it’s weakness
in watching you just walking by…”
Great job. Look forward 2 reading more
Thank you mummie21, hope to see you again