You know our hearts
are smiling at each other
there have been times
we want to kill each other
but when hearts love
they’re working undercover
to put things right
so they can be together
We have no say in something
so profound
The day we met
my heart knew what we’d found
before you even spoke
I felt it pound
our hearts had just made friends
..without a sound
And when you’re far away
I feel it ache
the thought of losing you
makes my heart break
People say we’re made
for one another
I say
it’s because
our hearts
are smiling at each other
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What a lovely allusion! The concept of undercover shenanigans outside of your control is enlightening and you have crafted this in your usual plain-speak and tonal language. I have greatly enjoyed this one. Your years of developing your poetic skills is very evident in this piece. Well done,
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You’re such a good audience, thank you for your very observant comments xo
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nice one
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A beautiful and positive poem for love. I like the statement.
“our hearts
are smiling at each other”
Thank you for the amazing poetry.
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Thank you for popping by 🙂
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